Empty Sounds of the Wind

Jose the Galactic Poet

Incredible work of description, as I read I was transported to the cliff and saw Edmund and t the same time I heard the gunshots. Excellent work

Renegade96

I'm glad you asked me to check this out, this is pretty damn good!

Liar-A

Solid writing, thick descriptions and deep feelings. Great job. I certainly never tend to read a thing, unless it’s out of the limits of realities beliefs. But this was very good... really good!

shadowgate

This is powerful. The first half reminded me of Johnny Got His Gun a movie that Metallica paid tribute to with their video One. I will continue reading this story.

Biny03

its good!!

Hope S. Brown

Great Work!!

WinnerLight

Top notch narrative

WolfQueen

You suggested on my profile that I read this book and I am so glad you did. I'm only on the first chapter and am already hooked. Fantastic job with the imagery and I am so excited to continue reading!

reiki650

Solid writing. Very descriptive and wanting more.

Christy Writes

I feel very bad for Edmun. From his struggle with PTSD, which at his time was known as "shell shock", to his father not recognizing him, fate seems to be set against our main character. I hope things change for the better and that he can live a decent life once again.

AncientRome

I ENJOYED THE FIRST CHAPTER IT WAS SO HEARTBREAKING,AND HAD SO MUCH AND DESCRIPTIVE SCENES. I COULD SEE AND FEEL THE SCENE. I WAS THERE ON THAT VERY CLIFF SEEING AND HEARING HIS WORDS. I LOVE IT VERY POWERFUL!

AncientRome

I AM GONE TO READ A CHAPTER EACH DAY.

Eterneum

This was a very interesting chapter, the main character is developed thoroughly. A very emotional and inspirational novelette, I will read it in its entirety.

zakiasultana

Thanks for inviting me to read your novelette. You have done an amazing job. Though I have read only 4 chapters so far, I will read the remaining chapters for sure. Because it's such a powerful story. You have your readers hooked up into the story. I am totally invested and I am loving it so far.

Prism Persona

I tell you no lie, I wish I could write a story this well! I applaud you JL! I was on the verge of tears! So much raw emotions were poured into this! I very much wanted someone to hug Edmond as I was pulled into the painful paradox of his tortured and broken mind. Although his father didn’t recognize him, that bittersweet moment they shared at the end of the chapter is very toughing! I look forward to chapter two!

A. G. Smith

This was a heart-wrenching description of the symptoms of war. i foresee dark times ahead for Edmund. You have a great style of prose: very descriptive and articulate. I will keep reading, for sure.

MadeshGotBars

Its truly A must read, It even triggered my poetic senses i will surely recommend this to my friends and fellow poets and writers

C. S. Spence

Good descriptive writing. I'm not entirely sure whats going on, though. It felt like a dream sequence, but then switching to Edmond's POV made it seem real? But there seems to be a good theme and emotion happening.

A.E. Surdam

I enjoyed the first chapter. I felt the tension between the father and son, and I was just like John and doubted that Edmund was his son. But toward the end, I wondered if he truly was.

GCJ

After your quickee, I decided to read-and you've got me hooked.