Young protagonist Tobias Evans is unwillingly thrust into an age old conflict humans have been unaware of for centuries when he only wanted to find his mother amongst the ever growing disappearances in his home city. Though as he comes to find out, various scriptures, hieroglyphs, cave paintings and other myths and lores have proven throughout time that we have encountered what the unwilling hero slowly unravels throughout the story.
Although bothered by the fact he'd be more than willing to be another average person in this chaos he's found himself in, Toby finds himself thrust into a journey to find more than he bargained for.
A test post for a story I'm attempting to write. Constructive criticism is welcome! Title/idea for the story is from Tomorrow Never Comes by VNV Nation.
Table of Contents
Intro
"War does not determine who is right -- only who is left." -- anonymous
In the beginning, all Realms were once united. The... Read Chapter
Chapter One
The wind wisped up along the tall buildings, blowing paper, plastic and other garbage left by humanity among the streets far below; occas... Read Chapter
chapter two
It was already dark out when Tobias
awoke. The clock shown half past ten in a worn and faded red, he realized as he rubbed the sleep fr... Read Chapter
Chapter Three
All of Saturday went the same way as the
night prior, and he was really starting to get worried. There were no missed calls from his mo... Read Chapter
Chapter Four
After a quick call to the school
informing him he was going to be late with the promise of something from the police station to show he... Read Chapter
Chapter Five
“Tobias?”
Mrs Thompson’s voice was sweet as honey as she whispered
lightly, touching his shoulder and waking him from trance ... Read Chapter
Chapter Six
Getting a bus ticket was easy enough. As he only had
one bag, they had allowed him to consider it a carry-on and take it onto the bus i... Read Chapter
Chapter Seven
Toby was unable to find sleep throughout the majority
of the bus ride, with the setting sun slowly dipping down along the horizon to al... Read Chapter
Chapter Eight
The clown was quick to scatter, narrowly missing the
broadsword that was hurled at him. The weapon shook lightly as it lodged itself in... Read Chapter
Chapter Nine
Toby groaned, rolling over onto his side to better sit himself upright.
Damn, that hurt worse than -- a lot of things really. Rubbing a... Read Chapter
Chapter Ten
As predicted, going to the police proved to be futile.
The apartment was blocked off, and Alice had saved Claire from nearly going to t... Read Chapter
chapter 11
The wind was brisk that afternoon, with summer slowly fading into autumn and causing many of the plantlife to slowly start changing color... Read Chapter
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Darcy McGrath
Wow, impressive
Mon, August 26th, 2024 3:09pmAre you open for suggestion?
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Thank you, and always
Mon, August 26th, 2024 8:22pm