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"Powerful and sad, Thomas; the feelings are palpable. The last line was almost chilling. Nice."
When I was
20
I became
involved with
a married woman.
She said that
her husband was
abusive.
She was looking
for a way out
or a break.
She had the
most amazing eyes.
Wild and dark,
like a walnut, on fire.
She smelled like
the earth, sweat,
and wildflowers.
There was something
uncaged about her.
I was young
and naive.
I believed everything
and hoped too much.
The sex was
ferocious.
She taught me a lot.
We broke the
bed and took
bubble baths together.
It was a lavender love.
One day, she came
home with a balloon and
flowers.
She said we are
having a baby.
Those wild
eyes flashed pure joy.
My mom was
worried.
"She has a husband."
My mother was a realist.
She accepted it though,
even bought the woman
some gifts.
It didn't take long for
Amber to show a side
of her, I hadn't seen.
I caught her in some
small lies, and she became
violent when upset.
The affair ended.
She went back to
her husband.
It felt like my heart was
being
ripped out through
my nose.
Pain like a
rotting organ.
I remember talking to
a friend about it on
the phone,
pausing to vomit.
It hurt so
fucking bad.
Her sister called
me a week after
the split.
I asked about the
pregnancy.
It was all a lie.
She had a
hysterectomy a few
years earlier.
I still believe in people,
and hope too much,
and the years have made
me wiser.
I heard much
later that
she died at 40 of
lung cancer.
Those beautiful dark
eyes finally got
some rest.
Submitted: December 22, 2024
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Sun, December 22nd, 2024 2:08pmPowerful and sad, Thomas; the feelings are palpable. The last line was almost chilling. Nice.
Sun, December 22nd, 2024 6:56pmExcellent Poem. You have to have lived to write. Well written.
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tom mcmullen
Sad story Thomas, best we know not our fate!
Sun, December 22nd, 2024 6:19amAuthor
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so true. Thanks.
Sun, December 22nd, 2024 12:19pm