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some thoughts in florida.

Uploaded: February 11, 2025


There is a flash of light at inception,
And a screening at Genesis,
Where the fruit flies flies,
Among these clouds in the sky.

These random thoughts,
Pass by my brain's thoughts,
On these calm brighter skies,
Here in sunny Florida.

The clouds looked to be touchable,
Just a lover of this swamping life,
With a snowbird wife,
She brings me a smidgen of excitement.

Enjoying those lazy days,
Sitting with her serving drinks,
Watching her slumber,
She's such a beautiful puzzle in life.

Thy coffee has truncated thy sleep,
As I watch this beautiful sun rise,
Watching the water surface trickle,
Freeing my mind from a vice.


Submitted: February 10, 2025

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Bert Broomberg

There's some wonderful imagery again. The double meaning of freeing a mind from a vice is simply outstanding.

Mon, February 10th, 2025 1:26pm

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Thank you Bert!

Tue, February 11th, 2025 4:46am

Thomaswcase8'.

Superb work.

Mon, February 10th, 2025 10:59pm

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Thank you Thomas.

Tue, February 11th, 2025 4:46am

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