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The Cursed Canyon
By Jimmy Rui
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Lost in the Canyon
Kevin and his friends had been planning this hiking trip for weeks. The group of five had been best friends since middle school, and they always took an annual adventure trip. This year, they decided to challenge themselves with a trek through the rugged Grand Canyon.
The trip started out perfectly. The sun was shining, the air was warm, and the landscape was breathtaking. The group followed the marked trails, stopping to admire the views and take pictures. It felt like a peaceful escape from their busy lives.
By mid-afternoon, they reached a secluded area off the beaten path. It wasn’t marked on any map, but Kevin had heard about it from an online hiking forum. "It’s supposed to be this hidden gem," Kevin explained to his friends, “practically untouched by tourists.”
Curiosity got the better of them, and they agreed to explore. The trail was narrow and steep, cutting through jagged cliffs and thick brush. The deeper they went, the more isolated it felt. Soon, the familiar sounds of other hikers and the sight of canyon landmarks disappeared.
As they ventured further, the sunlight began to dim behind the towering canyon walls. Kevin glanced at his watch—4:30 p.m. They still had plenty of daylight left to make it back. But then, the trail began to twist and turn unexpectedly. Kevin tried to follow the route from memory, but after an hour of hiking, the group realized they were no longer sure which direction they had come from.
“Are we lost?” Sarah asked, her voice laced with concern.
“No, we’re fine,” Kevin assured her, though he wasn’t so certain anymore. The narrow path was now overgrown with thorny bushes, and the terrain became steeper and rockier. They hadn’t seen a single hiker for miles.
As the sun dipped lower in the sky, casting long shadows over the canyon, they began to panic. They had no map of this area and the cell signal was nonexistent. What was supposed to be a fun detour had turned into a real-life survival situation.
The group huddled together, trying to come up with a plan. Kevin suggested they retrace their steps, but the fading light made it nearly impossible to see the way. “Let’s stay here and wait until morning,” Mark said, looking uneasy. “We shouldn’t be walking in the dark.”
They agreed to camp out for the night. Using what little supplies they had, they built a small fire and tried to make the best of the situation. But as the night wore on, the temperature dropped dramatically. The howling winds echoed through the canyon, and every rustle in the bushes seemed to send shivers down their spines.
Kevin lay awake, staring at the dark canyon walls towering above him. Every sound was amplified—the cracking of twigs, the shifting rocks. He couldn’t help but feel like something was watching them, lurking just beyond the firelight.
Suddenly, a loud crash echoed through the canyon. Everyone shot up, wide-eyed and alert.
“What was that?” Sarah whispered, her voice trembling.
Kevin scanned the area with his flashlight, but the beam only reached so far into the darkness. “I don’t know. Probably just rocks falling,” he said, trying to sound confident, though his heart was racing.
But then, another crash—louder this time—followed by the unmistakable sound of footsteps. Heavy, deliberate footsteps.
“We need to get out of here,” Mark whispered, grabbing his backpack.
“Wait, we can’t just run off in the dark,” Kevin argued. But before he could stop them, the group panicked and began scrambling to gather their things.
The footsteps grew louder, closer. The fire flickered wildly in the wind, casting eerie shadows against the canyon walls. Kevin grabbed his flashlight and turned to face the direction of the sound.
“Is anyone there?” he called out, his voice shaking.
Silence.
Then, without warning, a figure emerged from the darkness—a man, covered in dirt and grime, his eyes wild. He looked like he hadn’t seen another human in years.
“You... you need to leave,” the man rasped, his voice hoarse and desperate. “This place... it’s not safe.”
Kevin and his friends froze. The man’s eyes darted around, filled with terror.
“What are you talking about?” Kevin asked, stepping forward cautiously.
“The canyon... it’s cursed,” the man whispered, his voice trembling. “People come here... they don’t leave.”
Before anyone could respond, the man turned and sprinted into the darkness, his footsteps echoing off the canyon walls until they disappeared into the night.
Kevin’s heart pounded in his chest. He exchanged a look with his friends—none of them knew what to say. The wind howled through the canyon, and the fire sputtered, casting long shadows over the rocks.
“Let’s go,” Sarah said, her voice barely above a whisper. “We can’t stay here.”
With no other choice, they packed up their gear and followed the faint trail by flashlight, hoping to find their way out before morning. But as they walked, Kevin couldn’t shake the man’s words from his mind. Was it just the ramblings of a crazy person? Or was there something more to the canyon than they had realized?
The footsteps continued to follow them, though they never saw another person. All night long, they felt like they were being watched, pursued by something they couldn’t see.
By the time they stumbled back onto the main trail at dawn, exhausted and terrified, they made a silent pact: never speak of what happened in the canyon.
Some places, Kevin realized, are better left unexplored.
The Curse of the Canyon
Kevin and his friends trudged back to the main trail as the first rays of dawn broke over the canyon. Their exhaustion was palpable—dark circles under their eyes, clothes torn from scrambling through the brush, and a deep, unspoken fear that clung to them like the morning mist. None of them spoke about the man they’d encountered or the eerie footsteps that had followed them through the night. They were just relieved to be back on familiar ground.
But as they walked back towards the visitor’s center, something felt off. The landscape around them seemed different. The trees looked older, the air heavier. Kevin glanced around, feeling a gnawing sensation in his gut, like they weren’t truly out of danger yet.
Finally, they reached the visitor’s center. The parking lot was nearly empty, and the building looked as if it hadn’t been used in years. The once-bright signs were faded, and weeds had overtaken the flowerbeds. Kevin frowned and walked up to the door, pushing it open with some effort. Dust hung in the air like a blanket, and the inside was dark and abandoned.
“This... wasn’t like this when we came in,” Sarah said, her voice trembling.
“Yeah, this place was full of tourists yesterday,” Mark added, his face pale.
“Maybe we came out a different way?” Kevin suggested, though even he didn’t believe it. “Maybe this is an old entrance?”
But as they stepped inside, the silence was oppressive. The walls were lined with missing-person posters, some of which were decades old. Kevin scanned the names and faces, a chill running down his spine. There were dozens of them, all hikers and campers who had vanished in the canyon. And then, his heart stopped.
At the very bottom of the wall was a set of new posters—pictures of him and his friends. “Missing: Kevin Walker, Sarah Thompson, Mark Greene, and Rachel Davis. Last seen: Grand Canyon, 3 days ago.”
“That’s... that’s us,” Rachel whispered, her voice barely audible. “But we were only gone one night.”
A cold dread settled over the group. Kevin tore down the poster, his mind racing. How could they have been missing for three days when it had only been one night? And how could their posters be up already?
“We need to get out of here,” Mark said, backing away from the wall. “We need to leave now.”
Panic set in. They rushed outside, sprinting toward the parking lot, but their car wasn’t there. In fact, there were no cars at all, not even the ones they remembered from the day before.
“What is happening?” Sarah cried, her voice shaking.
“We’re still in the canyon,” Kevin said quietly, his mind racing. “That guy last night... he said people come here and don’t leave.”
The group stood in stunned silence, realization dawning on them all at once. They hadn’t escaped. Somehow, they were still trapped in the canyon, in a different version of it—one where time moved differently, where they were already considered lost.
Suddenly, footsteps echoed behind them. Heavy, deliberate footsteps, just like the ones they’d heard the night before. The same dread from the night in the woods gripped Kevin’s chest.
“We have to move,” Kevin said, turning to face the group. “Now.”
Without waiting for a response, he took off toward the nearest trail, his friends close behind. They ran as fast as they could, hearts pounding, the footsteps never far behind. But no matter how fast they ran, the canyon seemed to stretch endlessly before them, like it was leading them deeper, pulling them further away from the world they knew.
Hours passed, or maybe it was only minutes—time had lost all meaning. The sun hung low in the sky, casting long, eerie shadows over the rocky terrain. Kevin’s legs burned, and his lungs ached, but he didn’t stop. None of them did.
Finally, they stumbled upon a small cabin nestled between two cliffs. It looked old and weathered, but the chimney puffed smoke, and the door was slightly ajar. Desperate for any sign of life, they rushed toward it.
Kevin pushed the door open, and the group stepped inside. The interior was dark, but there was a fire crackling in the hearth. An old man sat in a chair near the fire, his eyes hollow and distant.
“You shouldn’t have come here,” the man said, his voice raspy and worn.
“Please, we need help,” Kevin begged. “We’re lost. We just want to get out.”
The old man shook his head slowly. “There’s no getting out,” he whispered. “Once the canyon takes you, it doesn’t let go.”
Kevin’s heart sank. “What do you mean? There has to be a way out.”
The old man stood up, moving toward the window. “I’ve been here for 40 years,” he said softly. “Hikers, campers—they come and go, but the canyon keeps them. Some go mad, some vanish entirely, and some...” He trailed off, looking back at them with haunted eyes. “Some become part of it.”
The group stared at him in disbelief. “We’re not staying here,” Mark said defiantly. “We’re getting out.”
The old man chuckled darkly. “You can try,” he said. “But the canyon always wins.”
Kevin exchanged a look with his friends, and without another word, they left the cabin and plunged back into the wilderness. The footsteps followed them relentlessly, and the whispers of the wind seemed to mock their desperation.
By nightfall, they realized the truth: they were no longer in the same world they had come from. The canyon had claimed them, and now they were just another set of missing faces on a wall, lost in the endless, unforgiving wilderness.
The Canyon's Grip
The further they ran from the cabin, the darker the canyon became. The oppressive silence was broken only by the sound of their footsteps and the whispers of the wind, which seemed to carry eerie voices—murmurs they couldn’t understand. Kevin’s pulse raced as he led the group, glancing behind him every few moments to make sure the others were still close. But the endless twists and turns of the canyon felt like a labyrinth with no way out.
“How do we get out of here?” Rachel panted, her eyes wide with fear. “We’ve been running in circles!”
Kevin didn’t know how to answer. Every direction they turned felt like it led them deeper into the heart of the canyon, into some place where time and space no longer made sense.
Mark, who had been lagging behind, suddenly stopped. “Wait!” he called out, his voice breathless. “What’s that?”
Kevin turned to see what Mark was pointing at. In the distance, silhouetted against the fading light, stood a figure. It was too far to make out any details, but it was clearly human—standing completely still and facing them.
“Is it the old man?” Sarah whispered, her voice trembling.
“No,” Kevin said, shaking his head. “It’s not him.”
The figure didn’t move. It just stood there, unmoving, watching.
“We need to go,” Rachel urged, backing away. “Now.”
Without another word, they turned and continued running. But as they weaved through the maze-like paths, they began to notice something horrifying—there were more figures. Shadowy outlines, just beyond the trees, watching them from a distance. Each time they passed a new bend, another figure appeared, always still, always silent.
“It’s like they’re following us,” Sarah whimpered, her voice breaking. “But they’re not moving.”
“They’re not real,” Kevin muttered, trying to convince himself as much as the others. “It’s just the canyon playing tricks on us.”
But deep down, Kevin didn’t believe it. The figures were too solid, too real.
As the darkness closed in, the group finally came to a wide clearing. In the center was a large, circular stone, worn smooth by years of wind and erosion. Strange markings were etched into its surface—symbols none of them recognized.
“This wasn’t here before,” Rachel said, her voice barely audible.
Kevin stepped forward cautiously, his flashlight sweeping across the stone. The symbols seemed to pulse, as though they were alive, and the air around the clearing felt heavier—thicker.
“I don’t like this,” Mark said, gripping his backpack tightly. “We should go around.”
But Kevin, feeling an inexplicable pull, knelt beside the stone, his fingers tracing the symbols. “It feels... old. Like it’s been here forever.”
Suddenly, the wind picked up, swirling violently around them. The whispers grew louder, almost deafening now, but still incomprehensible. The figures that had been watching them from the shadows began to move—slowly, deliberately—stepping closer to the clearing.
“We need to leave!” Sarah shouted, her voice barely audible over the roaring wind.
But Kevin couldn’t move. His hands were frozen on the stone, his eyes wide as he stared at the symbols. Images flashed in his mind—scenes of people being swallowed by the canyon, dragged into the earth, their bodies twisted and broken. The canyon wasn’t just cursed—it was alive, and it had been feeding on those who wandered too far for centuries.
“Kevin!” Mark grabbed his arm, shaking him. “Snap out of it!”
With a gasp, Kevin pulled his hands away from the stone, the visions vanishing. He staggered back, breathing heavily.
“We need to go,” he said hoarsely. “Now.”
They turned and bolted from the clearing, the figures still closing in from all sides. The wind whipped at their faces, the whispers growing louder and more frantic. It was as if the canyon itself was trying to stop them from escaping.
Suddenly, the ground beneath them began to tremble. Rocks tumbled down the canyon walls, and the path in front of them split open, revealing a deep chasm. The group skidded to a stop, their breath ragged.
“We’re trapped,” Rachel cried, staring at the gaping hole in the ground.
Kevin looked around wildly, searching for another way. But the figures were closing in, their hollow eyes fixed on the group. The canyon seemed to be collapsing in on itself, the walls shifting and crumbling as the ground shook beneath their feet.
“There!” Sarah pointed to a narrow ledge that hugged the canyon wall, barely wide enough to walk on.
Without hesitation, they scrambled toward the ledge, pressing themselves against the rock as they edged their way across. Below them, the chasm yawned like a black void, ready to swallow them whole. The figures watched from the other side, unable to follow, their bodies blending into the darkness.
Finally, after what felt like hours, they reached the other side of the canyon. The ground was stable again, and the shaking had stopped. But the canyon felt different now—quieter, more still. The oppressive weight of the curse seemed to have lifted, at least for the moment.
“I think... we’re out of the worst of it,” Mark said, his voice shaky.
Kevin wasn’t so sure. He glanced back at the canyon, its walls looming high above them, and shuddered. Whatever had happened there—whatever the canyon was—hadn’t let them go. Not fully.
“We need to keep moving,” Kevin said quietly. “We’re not safe yet.”
They continued their trek, the silence now unnerving after the chaos they had just escaped. As they walked, Kevin couldn’t shake the feeling that they hadn’t really escaped at all—that the canyon was still watching them, waiting for its next chance to strike.
And then, in the distance, Kevin saw something that made his heart stop.
The visitor’s center was ahead, just as abandoned and decrepit as before. But standing in front of it, bathed in the dim glow of the setting sun, was the old man. He was waiting for them.
The Canyon's Hold
Kevin’s heart raced as he stared at the old man standing in front of the visitor’s center. The others slowed to a stop behind him, their breath ragged, eyes wide with disbelief. They had escaped the collapsing canyon, crossed the deadly ledge, and now they were back where they started—only something about the man felt even more sinister this time.
The old man was motionless, his gaze fixed on the group. The flickering light from the fading sun cast long shadows across the ground, making his figure look distorted, almost otherworldly.
“We… we can’t stay here,” Rachel whispered, backing away. “There’s something wrong with him.”
Kevin felt the pull in his gut again, like something was luring him closer. But every instinct screamed at him to run. He turned to the others, trying to keep his voice steady. “We need to go back into the canyon.”
“No!” Sarah snapped. “We barely made it out! That place almost killed us.”
“If we stay here, we’re dead anyway,” Mark said, his voice tense. “He’s not here to help us.”
The old man finally moved, taking a slow, deliberate step toward them. His face remained expressionless, but his eyes seemed hollow, as though whatever humanity had been left in him was long gone.
Kevin swallowed hard. “Run.”
Without waiting for a response, he took off toward the canyon, his friends following close behind. Behind them, they heard the old man’s footsteps quicken. The ground beneath them seemed to tremble once more, as if the canyon was waking up again, hungry for its next victim.
They scrambled through the rocky terrain, retracing their steps, but the landscape was changing, shifting around them. The path they had followed before was gone, replaced by jagged cliffs and narrow ravines. The whispers on the wind grew louder, more frantic, as though the canyon was alive, urging them deeper into its grasp.
“I can’t keep going,” Rachel panted, her face pale with exhaustion.
“You have to,” Kevin urged, grabbing her arm and pulling her along. “We can’t stop now.”
Suddenly, the ground in front of them gave way, crumbling into another gaping chasm. The group skidded to a halt, teetering on the edge. Below them, the abyss stretched endlessly into the darkness.
“What do we do now?” Sarah asked, her voice filled with panic.
Kevin scanned the surroundings, his mind racing. There was no way around the chasm, and the canyon walls were too steep to climb. But then, he saw it—just a few feet to their left was a narrow bridge of stone, barely wide enough to walk across. It was risky, but it was their only option.
“We go across,” Kevin said, pointing to the bridge.
“Are you insane?” Mark exclaimed. “That thing could collapse any second!”
“If we stay here, he’ll catch us,” Kevin said, glancing over his shoulder. The old man was still following, his steps slow but relentless.
One by one, they carefully edged their way across the stone bridge, their hearts pounding with every step. The wind howled around them, and loose rocks tumbled into the abyss below, but they kept moving. When they finally reached the other side, they collapsed to the ground, their legs trembling with relief.
But their relief was short-lived.
The old man had reached the edge of the chasm, standing on the opposite side of the bridge. He didn’t follow them across. Instead, he raised his hand slowly, pointing directly at Kevin.
Kevin felt a chill run down his spine. The old man’s eyes were locked on him, and for the first time, Kevin realized what was happening.
“He’s not after all of us,” Kevin whispered. “He’s after me.”
“What?” Rachel asked, her voice shaking.
Kevin’s mind flashed back to the stone they had found earlier, the one with the strange symbols. The visions of people being swallowed by the canyon, the feeling that the canyon itself was alive—it all made sense now. The canyon didn’t just take anyone. It chose.
“He’s after me,” Kevin repeated, standing up. “I think… I think the canyon wants me.”
“No,” Sarah said, grabbing his arm. “You’re not going anywhere.”
Kevin shook his head, his expression grim. “If I don’t go, it won’t stop. It’ll keep coming after all of us.”
Mark stepped forward, his face pale but determined. “Then we all fight it. We’re not letting you go alone.”
Kevin smiled weakly. “I don’t think it works that way.”
The old man remained on the other side of the chasm, still pointing at Kevin, his eyes unblinking. The canyon seemed to pulse with energy, as though it was waiting, biding its time.
“I have to go,” Kevin said quietly. “I’m the only one it wants.”
“No!” Rachel cried, tears streaming down her face. “We’ll find another way. There has to be another way.”
But deep down, Kevin knew there wasn’t. The canyon had chosen him, just like it had chosen the others before him. It wouldn’t stop until it had claimed what it wanted.
With a heavy heart, Kevin turned to his friends. “Tell my family what happened. Tell them it wasn’t their fault.”
Before anyone could stop him, Kevin stepped back onto the stone bridge and began walking toward the old man. The canyon seemed to grow quieter with each step, the whispers fading into silence. The others watched in horror as Kevin crossed the chasm, his figure growing smaller with every step.
When he finally reached the other side, the old man lowered his hand, and the two of them stood face to face. For a moment, nothing happened. And then, without warning, the ground beneath Kevin’s feet crumbled, and he plummeted into the abyss.
The canyon roared to life, the wind howling and the ground shaking violently. Rocks tumbled from the cliffs, and the sky above seemed to darken. Sarah, Rachel, and Mark barely had time to react before the stone bridge collapsed, separating them from the other side.
In the chaos, the whispers returned—louder now, more insistent, but no longer incomprehensible. This time, they understood.
“The canyon... always wins.”
The Canyon’s Revenge
Sarah, Rachel, and Mark stood frozen, staring in horror at the spot where Kevin had vanished. The ground beneath their feet still trembled as the wind howled, but the canyon seemed to have calmed now that it had claimed its sacrifice. The whispers that had plagued them for hours were finally gone, leaving only the eerie silence of the canyon.
“Kevin…” Rachel whispered, her voice cracking. “He’s gone.”
Sarah dropped to her knees, tears streaming down her face. “We can’t just leave him,” she sobbed. “We have to do something.”
Mark knelt beside her, his face pale and drawn. “What can we do?” he said bitterly. “The canyon took him. It wanted him, and now... he’s gone.”
But even as he said the words, a sense of unease gnawed at him. The canyon had claimed Kevin, but something still didn’t feel right. The air was too still, too oppressive, as if the canyon hadn’t truly finished its work.
“We need to get out of here,” Mark said, pulling Sarah to her feet. “If we stay any longer, it’ll come for us next.”
Rachel wiped her eyes and nodded reluctantly. “But how? The bridge is gone, and the canyon... it’s changing. We’ll get lost.”
Mark scanned their surroundings. The canyon walls were shifting again, the landscape rearranging itself in subtle but unnerving ways. Paths that had once been clear were now blocked by jagged rocks, and strange shadows seemed to dance in the distance.
“We follow the river,” he said after a moment. “It has to lead out eventually.”
They began walking, their footsteps echoing in the vast emptiness of the canyon. Every now and then, Mark glanced over his shoulder, half-expecting to see Kevin or the old man following them. But the path behind them remained empty, the silence almost suffocating.
For hours, they followed the river, winding through narrow passages and towering cliffs. But the further they went, the more disoriented they became. The sky above had darkened to an unnatural shade of gray, and the air was growing colder. The sense of being watched never left them, even though they saw no more shadowy figures.
Rachel stumbled and caught herself on a rock. “I don’t think we’re getting out,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “It feels like we’re just going in circles.”
Mark didn’t want to admit it, but she was right. The canyon wasn’t letting them leave.
“We have to keep moving,” he said, though his voice lacked conviction. “We can’t just give up.”
Suddenly, Sarah stopped dead in her tracks, her eyes wide with terror. “Do you hear that?” she whispered.
Mark and Rachel froze, straining to listen. At first, there was nothing but the sound of the river rushing beside them. But then, faintly, they heard it—footsteps. Slow, deliberate, and growing louder.
“Is it him?” Rachel gasped, panic rising in her chest.
Mark shook his head, his pulse racing. “It’s not Kevin.”
Out of the shadows, the figure of the old man emerged once more, his eyes locked on them. But this time, he wasn’t alone. Behind him, barely visible in the dim light, were more figures—dozens of them. They stood in silence, their faces obscured, watching with an eerie stillness.
“We have to run,” Sarah whispered, her voice trembling. “Now.”
They took off, sprinting along the riverbank, their hearts pounding in their chests. But no matter how fast they ran, the figures seemed to follow, always just out of sight. The whispers had returned, but this time they were louder, more insistent.
“They’re everywhere,” Rachel cried, her voice breaking. “We’ll never get away!”
Mark felt the same crushing hopelessness, but he pushed forward, refusing to stop. He couldn’t let the canyon win. Not again.
As they rounded a bend in the river, they stumbled upon something they hadn’t expected—a narrow cave opening hidden among the rocks. It was barely large enough for them to squeeze through, but it was their only option.
“In here!” Mark shouted, leading the way.
One by one, they crawled through the cave’s entrance, the jagged rocks scraping their skin. The whispers faded as they ventured deeper into the cave, replaced by a heavy, oppressive silence.
Inside, the cave was pitch black, the air damp and cold. Mark fumbled for his flashlight, flicking it on, and the narrow beam illuminated the rough walls of the cave.
“Do you think we’re safe?” Rachel asked, her voice barely audible.
Mark didn’t answer. He didn’t know. The canyon had played tricks on them before—maybe this was just another trap. But for now, it seemed they were alone.
As they ventured further into the cave, they noticed strange markings on the walls—similar to the symbols they had seen on the stone in the clearing. The deeper they went, the more elaborate the symbols became, spiraling across the walls like a twisted map.
“What is this place?” Sarah whispered, running her fingers over the markings.
Mark felt a chill run down his spine. “It’s part of the curse,” he said grimly. “The canyon... it’s more than just a place. It’s alive. And this... this is its heart.”
The realization settled over them like a weight. They hadn’t escaped the canyon—they were walking right into its core.
Suddenly, the ground beneath them shifted, and the cave walls began to tremble. Rocks tumbled from the ceiling, and the air filled with the sound of cracking stone.
“We need to get out!” Mark shouted, pulling Rachel and Sarah back toward the entrance.
But before they could move, the floor gave way, and they plunged into darkness.
The Light Beneath
When the ground finally stopped moving, Sarah, Mark, and Rachel found themselves lying on a cool, damp surface. It was dark, but a faint glow illuminated the cavern around them. As they pushed themselves up, they realized they were in a spacious underground chamber, the walls glistening with moisture and glowing softly, reflecting a gentle, otherworldly light.
“What just happened?” Rachel asked, rubbing her head. “Are we… alive?”
Mark looked around, relief flooding through him. “Looks like it,” he said, rising to his feet. “But where are we?”
They began to explore the chamber, the glow growing brighter as they moved. It seemed to emanate from the walls themselves, which were adorned with the same mysterious symbols they had seen earlier. But now, instead of feeling threatening, the symbols felt warm and inviting, almost like a map guiding them.
“Maybe this is a way out,” Sarah suggested, tracing her fingers over the symbols. “They look like they’re leading somewhere.”
The trio followed the glowing markings, their initial fear slowly fading as they walked deeper into the chamber. They came to a circular area at the center of the cave, where the glow was brightest. In the middle stood a shimmering pool of water, reflecting the light above and casting delicate patterns on the walls.
“What is this place?” Rachel wondered aloud, awed by the beauty surrounding them.
Mark stepped closer to the pool, peering into the water. “I don’t know, but it feels... peaceful.”
As they stood there, a sense of calm washed over them. The tension that had gripped them since they entered the canyon seemed to melt away. They exchanged glances, realizing they were safe for the moment.
“What if this is a way to break the curse?” Sarah said, her voice hopeful. “Maybe the canyon wanted us to find this place.”
Mark nodded. “It could be. It’s like the canyon is trying to show us something. Maybe we can communicate with it.”
Rachel hesitated. “But how? We’ve been running from it this whole time.”
“We could try talking to it,” Mark suggested. “Maybe it just wants to be understood.”
They stood together in front of the pool, feeling the warm glow around them. Mark took a deep breath and spoke, his voice steady. “Canyon, we’ve come seeking peace. We didn’t mean to disturb you. We just want to go home.”
As he spoke, the water in the pool began to ripple gently. The glow intensified, and they felt a soft breeze pass through the chamber, carrying with it whispers—calm, soothing sounds that felt like reassurance.
“We understand your pain,” Rachel added, stepping forward. “We’ve lost a fri end, and we know you’re holding onto something deep within. But we’re not here to fight. We just want to live.”
The pool shimmered even brighter, and in its depths, they saw images—flashes of the canyon’s past, the people who had wandered through it, their joys and sorrows. It was a history woven into the very fabric of the earth, a story of connection, loss, and longing.
Suddenly, a figure began to take shape in the water. It was Kevin, his face serene and peaceful. He smiled at them, and in that moment, they understood: Kevin had not been taken by the canyon; he had become part of it, guiding them to this moment.
“Don’t be sad,” Kevin’s voice echoed in the chamber. “You’re safe now. You can break the curse together.”
The glow intensified, filling the chamber with a warmth that enveloped them. They grasped hands, feeling the strength of their bond, the love they had for one another. The pool began to swirl, and the symbols on the walls pulsed with light.
Together, they focused on the warmth, sending their thoughts and feelings into the pool. “We’re here for each other,” they said in unison. “We will not let fear separate us again.”
The chamber resonated with their words, the walls vibrating in harmony. The pool erupted with a brilliant light, and they felt a rush of energy flow through them. The canyon was responding, releasing the hold it had over them.
As the light enveloped them, they closed their eyes, trusting in the power of their friendship. Moments later, they felt a gentle lift, as if they were being carried upward, the weight of the canyon's darkness finally lifting.
When they opened their eyes, they found themselves standing at the edge of the canyon, the sun shining brightly above them. The familiar landscape spread out before them, untouched and vibrant.
“Did it work?” Rachel gasped, looking around.
Mark grinned, relief flooding his expression. “I think we did it. We broke the curse!”
Tears of joy filled Sarah’s eyes as they embraced each other. They had faced fear and loss, but they had emerged stronger, bound by their experiences.
“Let’s go home,” Rachel said, looking toward the trail that led back to the parking lot.
As they walked away from the canyon, they turned back one last time, the whispers now soft and melodic. The canyon had changed, and they knew it was a part of them now, a reminder of their courage and the bond they shared.
The sun dipped low in the sky, painting the world in golden hues, and for the first time in a long time, they felt truly free.
Submitted: February 27, 2025
© Copyright 2025 Jimmy Rui. All rights reserved.
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