Writer inspired... to you, who make me forget about me...
Yes, yes, my far & lonely one; My soul can hear your cry;
My caring love is safe for you and never will it die...
I feel your need and write to you, a token in the wind;
For through my words I loved you dear, yet fear that I have sinned.
So far away, you call to me, from off on lonely shore;
Inspired now, I write to you, to give a little more.
How am I ever just a man, my world you do endow;
A gift you bring, and in my mind, I jump and revel now.
Mental touch of heaven's peaks, the clefts & valleys deep;
Running free within that range, to grant a dream to reap.
Think of me & how I'd joy recieve from beauty given;
All those tender feelings that are from my love deriven;
Take you to the brink of cliff, a watch-post on horizon;
Look about for love my dear, someone to put your eyes on.
From the mirror of your eyes, the lake of life so placid;
Most important, look inside, your beauty unsurpassed...
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When you look for just anything, nothing can be found,
when you know exactly what you want, it may take a
little longer to find it, but you don't have to sift through
all of the dirt to look for the diamond, you go to where
the coal is to be found... Then look for the piece of coal
that handled the pressure in the right & best way...
When you do that, the Diamond will make itself
known...
Here now are beloved comments from devoted friends from the first time I posted this poem:
Lady Jewells; The Lady Liger pads close. Reveling in the raw moments of love divine. Far off in the distance her love stands. She longs to feel his hands in her fur. Rubbing her all the right ways and some wrong. She growls a whine - aching to feel his love. She tosses her head and slowly turns away.. slowly moves away..Posted: Feb 19, 2014
Author Comment:In my own way I reached out & I tried to touch you today... But, I guess you had slowly turned away... I hope not too far away...
Author Comment:I open my soul & I cry out for you... And all of the very special ones like you... You balance my day, enlighten my nights, spice up the rest & test out my heights...
cgirl001; This is one of your best poems yet. I see you growing as a writer and a rhymer.Posted: Feb 20, 2014
Author Comment:Thanks... I've missed our little conversations... You and your family are in my prayers... Are you doing ok?
Author Comment:You say such kind & loving things to me, & make me feel so good that I can't help but wish the Lord to enlighten you, bless & keep you & watch over all you do & say...
Author Comment:Thank you for the deep philosophy in that statement... I'll do my best... And leave Him the rest...
Author Comment:I do believe I have been so very well blessed... Friends like you not the least of those blessings...
DeeAnna; Simply put, you are a GIVER of love and because of that you draw all of its purity, like a magnet, back into your orbit and its pulse touches all of us!Posted: Feb 21, 2014
Author Comment:What a sweet, & genuine compliment from one of the best writers anywhere... I thank you so very much from the bottom of my heart for such a kind appraisal of who I am, & what I represent... I stand in awe of those such as you, & my biggest desire is that I can continually improve upon myself in such a way as to encourage more people to want to spend their precious time around me, & those who are around me, to have a stronger desire to get closer to me, in all healthy ways...
Please like, if you like, before you leave; Thanks my friends.
I very much appreciate knowing how these words make you feel.
Submitted: May 27, 2015
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Very good C: but quite short ;C
Fri, December 7th, 2012 12:35pm
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Thanks for the input... This was a spontaneous responce to one of the writers on Booksie for a work of theirs... Then I decided to go ahead & publish it.
Fri, December 7th, 2012 12:54pm
i was assuming your male and perhaps you are ... but this reeks of woman
far far to feeling for a man, I am certain
still despite the gender confusion
I really like this and shall tick the button as requested
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This was inspired in responce to another Author here on Booksie, & yes, I'm a man, but I do have strong feelings too. Thank you
Fri, December 7th, 2012 10:09pm
Really Beautiful! Enjoyed reading it, your rhyming is good!
Sat, December 8th, 2012 2:52am
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Thank you for saying so, I really appreciate that.
Fri, December 7th, 2012 10:18pm
I'm sure the woman you speak of in this poem is very special to you. Very well written and emtional .
Mon, December 10th, 2012 2:28am
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Actually she represents all women to me, & as such is a very real representative of the woman that I love the most, who, unfortunatly doesn't reciprocate as intensely this passionate love that I feel... It is for this reason, that I send this message out into the cyber air to the forces of nature, good, balance, and justice... If there is one person out there who can, & does benefit from these words, my life held purpose... I never know when I may not be here anymore to be able to make a difference, & this is my way of inputing something to the world that I may eventually be remembered for when all my physical remains can do is to fertilize the ground. Thank you for noticing how much I care... It says much about who you are... Please keep reading, I believe you'll find other works of value as well sweetie...
Sun, December 9th, 2012 7:25pm
the first thing i notice is the wonderful pacing and rhyming of your work....then a re-read showed me the lovely texture of your words and the heartfelt emotion...i am definitely going to walk through your garden of thoughts :) - alvin
Mon, December 10th, 2012 6:34pm
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I so thank you for your eloquant comments... Gives me a fresh desire to read all of your works as well, as though I really needed that, seeing as to how well you write yourself.
Mon, December 10th, 2012 4:17pm
im so glad to see you supporrted for your writing. i just wanted to say this is my favorite poem from your work. itts the heart of grace and tenderness. i love it.
Tue, December 11th, 2012 7:48am
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Thank you for your kind words of praise... You who has proven to be a true devoted follower of my feeble attempts to change the world at least in some small way... I'm indebted to your tribute, & encouraged by your admiration... Thank you.
Wed, December 12th, 2012 12:53am
Nice rhyme bro. I would've never thought of rhyming horizon with eyes on. Very clever indeed.
Tue, December 18th, 2012 6:50am
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Thank you for noticing... It's much appreciated. I'm really enjoying your work also... Stay steady...
Mon, December 17th, 2012 11:17pm
token in the wind -nice usage
i liked the way you beautifully expressed the emotion of loneliness.
let HIM bless you further to write more.
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Thank you for your prayer on my unworthy behalf... You honor me... To fly, to excell, to share, to express, this is the pleading of my soul... Express with me...
Sat, January 12th, 2013 1:16am
Beautifully worded - and you have Shelley Ann to thank for recommending you.
Tue, January 29th, 2013 5:52am
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Very nice of her... I'll be sure to say thanks... Have you walked through any other parts of my mental garden? I'd love to have you read from others of my works & leave your lovely dew drops of joy in the comments of my fertile mental fields... Such pleasure...
Wed, January 30th, 2013 12:59am
Nice rhymes and wonderful dedication to detail for that special person who has eloped or vanished from your life.Melancholic reflection at it's best.
Fri, February 8th, 2013 2:41pm
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Thank you for the mental "Pat on the back", I can count on special friends like you who I've grown so close to, for a word of encouragement... Could you come around more often? Thanks again, my newly developed, hope to be better aquainted with, comforting to be around, Writer...
Fri, February 8th, 2013 8:03pm
Men who don't have feelings wouldn't write such a divine piece of poetry.Why do we need to see a woman's front end hang out on every page of the blasted internet?.
Sun, February 10th, 2013 3:12pm
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I sooo very much agree with you here... I'm turned on by knowing that I can please & excite a woman's body, but so much more so by knowing that I can excite her mind... THAT is the ultimate turn-on...
Mon, February 11th, 2013 9:43pm
Well written, you have such talent. Im loving your work!
Thu, April 25th, 2013 12:32am
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Thank you very much... I appreciate that... Visit anytime
Beautiful! Once again, your words amazingly pull at the strings of my heart, stirring emotion in my soul that I had never known was there.
Tue, June 11th, 2013 1:33am
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Thank you so very much for sharing that tender piece of intimate information with me... It warms my soul to know that my work has made a difference to someone of your stature...
Wed, June 12th, 2013 4:01am
Most important look inside, see beauty unsurpassed... I LOVE THAT!! You have that fine quality about you of not even having to try to entice your readers...you just do. xoxo PG
Thu, August 29th, 2013 1:49pm
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The joy you spread as you do the simple things that you do can be felt by all who get the opportunity to become acquainted with your elevated & caring soul... Thanks for becoming a cyber-friend... I'd love to have a chance to establish a very real & true friendship with the likes of wonderful people like you... Please consider that you have a new friend in California...
Thu, August 29th, 2013 8:59am
Awww that is the nicest thing for you to say. Sending you love back. xoxo PG
Thu, August 29th, 2013 11:53pm
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Thanks... It is well received.
Thu, August 29th, 2013 10:15pm
I don't know if you meant this to be sexual? Or am I just thinking wrong? I like it though!
Sun, February 23rd, 2014 12:33am
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I meant it to touch the deep parts of people's feelings... The inside of a person that most people never get to touch... I'm a person who likes to talk to your inner soul... Yes, I'm just a little bit flirty also, & I like to have fun playing around with people, & seeing if I can get a rise out of them...
Sun, February 23rd, 2014 4:24am
Really good .. Talent ..
Wed, June 18th, 2014 11:54am
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Thank you for your time & also for coming by to remark upon my works... I really appreciate it...
Wed, June 18th, 2014 5:05am
Oh my gosh! It's lovely!
Thu, February 11th, 2016 7:17pm
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Think of it as your own... Think of all of my work that way... That's the way they were written!
Mon, February 15th, 2016 3:45am
This is very romantic and sweetly relayed, Spy. I really felt the emotion behind the words that felt so from the heart. Thank you so much for sharing them. They are beautiful! :)
Fri, September 23rd, 2016 11:23pm
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I try very hard to portray the feelings in my heart as I write! Thank you my friend for noticing!
Fri, September 23rd, 2016 7:49pmFacebook Comments
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cgirl001
You are excelling at rhyming and pace sweeti...i like this alot. kudos to your writing and inspirations.
Tue, December 4th, 2012 7:38amAuthor
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Thank YOU for all of your comments, & your friendship.
Tue, December 4th, 2012 9:57am