All Eyes View, The Royal Wedding of Love!

unknown girl

What an awesome piece!
About Prince William and his soon to be wife!!
Wow!
I'm gonna watch the wedding tomorrow on TV :)
I can't wait to see it :)
you're talented :)

Ana Esther

Hello again! I've just read another of your poems and couldn't resist reading this one as well... It's great to see how optimistic and romantic you and your writing are!!! We, I mean, the whole planet need optimism and belief in positive and beautiful things. Keep up bringing beauty to the world! Cheers, Ana Esther
By the way, I'll be watching the wedding too, like the Unknown Girl!!!

Kurlz Basheld

Aw, that was a wonderful poem. It was sweet, and I liked it. :)

Srikanth Narayan

A cute contemporary poem. Loved it.

Graeme Montrose

Now that was lovely! A true romantic poem, love it!

cutiepiex

I find it quite amusing how American's etc are obsessed with the royal wedding and yet England really couldn't give a crap xD

MissUnknown

I have to agree with the above but you described the wedding really well :) I caught a little today :D

Darkie

Nice ^_^

MysteryRosesandBlackStars

Good poem :)

ScarletYoung

Awesome poem! Keep it up.

Scrawls and Doodles

Such a beautiful piece :) Bless the new couple :)
i missed the live telecast of the wedding tho, was giving my last paper that time.
hope you had a lovely time watching it :)

the dead poet

what a nice poem about love, i have not watched to much of this on TV, but i do know who they are, this is very nice use of words to bring it all together, very nicely done!

Gagan

It's such a nice gesture towards love...Very weel done friend, liked it..

shika

Oh!WOW!!!!That was so so so beautiful.I'm really impressed by your masterpiece!!!HATS OFF to you ROYAL WELL-WISHER : D

crazysai

well written i liked it

MissArielRose

I love how you use realy events such as this to inspire thought. But I'd like to tell you that great poetry comes not only from thought but from feeling. I think you're more than capable of finding how to portrait feeling. All you have to do is let go a bit, put yourself into your writing, then you shall be truly great. I mean not affend. Only inspire. If you do as I have suggested you will grow as a person and a writer. Once you understand how to make others feel about your writing you will know how to make them feel in the way you speak to them. All the good polotitians have figured this out. Whether by accident or years of studying human behavior. You need ot know yourself to know how to write. I'm sorry if you thought I wa saying you're not a good writer. Beacause you are. Though very few even have the potential to become great. I'd like to ask you to try and write about a persoal event that meant alot to you. But not just what happened, I'd like to be able to feel the way you felt. It's a silly request, though it may help you grow into a better writer. I'm no profesional, by no means. Just an observer. I'd love for you to try what I have suggested for your next poem then tell me to read. Hope I didn't offend. I really did love your poem.-Ariel

juststarting

This is really good :) So sweet as well, Kate is so pretty. Do you live in England? That's where they held it, right? Well done. x

KillerInStink

good to see you are as fresh as you are talented, keep it up.

Nocturnal Writer

Well written I liked this poem, you have a lot of skill and I hope you continue to write such heart warming poetry.

glitter snow426

oh, thank you very much, each one of you has sent such wonderful, uplifting, sweet comments. It's very special indeed, a true heartwarming gift!! I'll cherish this always! To each one of my dearest readers, WARMEST, SINCERE THANKS, YOU ARE SO KIND,THOUGHTFUL!! I'm blissfully grateful, happy writer, Vincey.