ALWAYS, SELDOM, NEVER

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A very romantic short poem.
Quite personal, yes ^^
Because I put my emotion in every single word.
What I felt about him Always? Seldom? Never?

"ALWAYS, SELDOM, NEVER"

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NEVER FAILED TO MAKE ME LOOK BAD,WHEN YOU’RE JEALOUS WITH OTHER GUYS;

NEVER LET MYSELF WIN IN OUR FIGHT,CAUSE I HATE SEEING YOU SAD;

NEVER LOOKED AT OTHER GUYS,WHENEVER YOU’RE BESIDE ME;

NEVER MISSED A SINGLE MOMENT,LETTING YOU KNOW HOW MUCH YOU MEAN TO ME.

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SELDOM, THAT YOU DON’T GIVE ME ADVICE,WHEN I’VE DONE SOMETHING WRONG;

SELDOM, THAT YOU LEAVE ME,WAITING ON THE PHONE;

SELDOM, THAT YOU COMPLIMENT ME,‘CAUSE YOU DON’T LIKE ME TO BE CONCEITED;

SELDOM, THAT YOU HURT ME,‘CAUSE YOU KNOW ITS SOMETHING I CANNOT DEAL WITH.

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ALWAYS PRAYS FOR ME,WHEN I FORGET TO DO SO;

ALWAYS SUPPORTS ME TO MOVE FORWARD,THOUGH I CAN NO LONGER GO ON;

ALWAYS LOVED ME UNCONDITIONALLY,EVEN IF YOU’VE NOTHINGTO GET;

NOW I PROMISE I’LL ALWAYS BE BESIDE YOU,‘TIL I TAKE MY LAST BREATH.

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THANK YOU GUYS FOR READING! PLEASE DO LEAVE A COMMENT BEFORE YOU LEAVE :)

SMILE.LOVE.PRAY.AND BE BLESSED.

Submitted: November 22, 2011

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hotstory4you

This is so sweet and beautiful poem, I like the way you have used the words and really nice concept. keep it up

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:16am

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Thank you. :)
That's what love could do. LOL!

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:26am

shiner42

This is great. I could learn, very much, from poets with your style. I have yet to make much, I like, that doesn't rhyme. I do like this though. I like this style also.

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:30pm

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hehe.. thanks shiner. Well, it's good to learn from anyone.
But it's also important to find ur own style, yourself.
You may see the ways of other writers, but try to innovate.
And think outside the box, there, you could even be so much better.. if not, be at the same level ^^

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:33pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

I loved it, but, this is what I (would) do, whenever I write a poem: I SING IT BACK TO MY SELF. That's right! If it sounds good like a song, it will read good, like a poem. Huh, my new motto. It's beautiful though. A million roses to you, and it get's my vote. If you can't sing find a friend that can and tell them to sing it back to you. I'm sure that they'll say: WHAT, ARE YOU KIDDING ME?

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:59pm

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Hahaha, it's easy to sing. lol.
but i'm concerned about the tone i'd use. :D
Great idea though.. sure my friends won't mind singing it with me.
But I tell you, when i'm writing poems, i repeat every verse like sooooooo many times. if it sounds good to me.
then i'll move to the next one. till i finish the whole piece :)

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:36pm

Nora Yang Hitatori

ah speechless and dont know how to say what I am thinking and no its not something bad okay XD

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 4:00pm

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hahaha.. I understand..
THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH Nora!
^^

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:27pm

ClareAnderson30896

love it, very sweet =) amazing

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 9:21pm

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thanks clare.. ^^

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 10:49pm

vampgirl

awwww really gd i lykd it, it was gd ....keep it up

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 2:12am

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thank you vampgirl :)

Thu, November 24th, 2011 3:00am

simplybarlarlar

This poem is really beautiful! Keep up the good work! :)

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 4:27am

Author
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Thank you simply :)

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:16pm

solosinger

I loved it! Thanks for requesting it!

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 5:10am

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no no no... THANK YOU for responding in my request..
I really do appreciate that.. ^^

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 11:15pm

Biya

Hey!
This is so beautifully written, i loved the flow of words, i love the rhyming part,meaningful,
very creative , well descriptive. over all. AMAZING!! I enjoyed it. *hats off* :)
Take care!:)

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 8:17am

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THANKS AGAIN Biya..
:)
Take care.. ;)

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 12:27am

Rhia2910

This was REALLY well done, your work is admirable. You have talent lol.

I do like how you wrote this going, Never, Seldom, Always, going backwards from the title.

Good work, I like it!

--Rhia:-)

Wed, November 23rd, 2011 2:36pm

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Hehehe.. Just to make it sweeter, I guess.
cause I like the last line to be the finale :)

Thu, November 24th, 2011 2:54am

fresh spirits

Thanks for inviting me to read this poem it was such a great pleasure to me.I have a great sense about poems and this one was lovely as well as your other one:)

Thu, November 24th, 2011 3:39am

Author
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Oh my..how sweet of you to say that..
Thank you soo much.. :)

Thu, November 24th, 2011 2:55am

terrex

i like it it's a very very good poem now any novels you recommend my taste in like horror crime romance fantasy?

Thu, November 24th, 2011 5:24pm

Author
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Ahehe, I don't know if I could match your standards.
I hope so..
Here are 2 of my novels.
DARKNESS OF MY SOUL
http://www.booksie.com/romance/novel/jhanery/darkness-of-my-soul
and IF YOU LOVE ME...
http://www.booksie.com/erotica/novel/jhanery/if-you-love-me
SORRY bout the grammar. I'll surely work on that tomorrow. :)
HOPE YOU'LL CHECK EM OUT..

Fri, November 25th, 2011 4:35am

littlemissromance13

Thanks for telling me about this.
I like it and you have good grammar. It was deep.
Xoxo

Thu, November 24th, 2011 6:50pm

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Hehehe, "good grammar"
*blush, i think i should apply my goodness in grammar from poetry to my novels. LOL

Fri, November 25th, 2011 4:30am

XxShadowWarrior16xX

Nice and well chilling. Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh! Hahahaha! Keep up the good work. Nice crossoul.

Thu, November 24th, 2011 6:55pm

Author
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"CROSSOUL" Wow, you really made my day..
First time to hear that from my readers..
Thank you so much.. ^^

Fri, November 25th, 2011 4:33am

taztaz

Heart Warming :] Lemme Tell You I Could Almost Feel The Words In My Heart :)

Fri, November 25th, 2011 7:10am

Author
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Hehe, thanks taztaz. ^^

Fri, November 25th, 2011 4:27am

Neekas

Hope it's always like this.Nice.

Fri, November 25th, 2011 11:34am

Author
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hehe, Not really sure bout that. Depends on my mood.
But my heart will always be present in everything I do, i mean my writings :)

Fri, November 25th, 2011 4:26am

CanadianIdiot

Very, very nice job =D I love the flow of it, even though some of the lines may be a bit long. But poetry doesn't always have to be so sing-songy, y'know? I love the rhymes and this poem regardless

Fri, November 25th, 2011 2:47pm

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Thanks.. :)
I know right. But I prefer poems that rhyme in the end, it sounds better to me.
Just my style also.. Hehe, you probably won't see a poem made by me that doesn't rhyme. LOL

Fri, November 25th, 2011 7:10am

Nikky Greene

I didnt understand it until the end, but now that I do, I love it!! Very nice job and I hope you come check out my new poem, "The Great Amour"

http://www.booksie.com/romance/poetry/nikky_greene/the-great-amour

*Em

Fri, November 25th, 2011 4:18pm

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Thank you..
Maybe tomorrow, I'll check it out. :)

Fri, November 25th, 2011 9:08am