Fear of Falling
What is this feeling?
I just can’t explain.
Why and how?
I’m feeling like this,
When you’re near,
It’s not the same at all.
I’m happy,
But feel sad.
I’m lonely
And terrified.
I’m confused,
But it feels so good.
I hate to admit it,
But yes!
This is love.
And I don’t wanna fall.
Because everything that fall
Gets BROKEN.
Submitted: March 17, 2012
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I love it! That's exactly how i feel, when i know that i love someone, i'm scared to fall for them because i don't want my heart to get broken. Love it!!
-Tatianna
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yeah.. i'm feeling that, too^^
thanks friend! :)
Oh Come on you wanna fall. The fall is worth the damage.
Wonderful poem.. loved it :)
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no, i dont^^ im scared of getting hurt over and over again..
thanks so much my friend! :)
Hey there^^, this was very nice:) short and sweet^^ good job! Liked it a lot
Mon, March 19th, 2012 2:28pm
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oh, thanks so much yume-chan! :))
Mon, March 19th, 2012 10:27pm
What a line "Because everything that fall gets broken......." This is very short and cute poem with real emotions, every reader will feel connected with it. Super-duper liked, thumps up for this good work, take care :) !
Mon, March 19th, 2012 2:29pm
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lol.. thanks so much friend for a sweet comment :))
yeah.. this is what im feeling right now :)) and thanks again my friend! :)) take care also
Nothing ventured nothing gain. Lovely poem and so true
Mon, March 19th, 2012 4:27pm
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thanks so much my friend! :)
Tue, March 20th, 2012 12:04am
Hey mate! When I read the title, I thought this poem would be about vertigo and fear of heights and stuff, but THIS AWESOME poem? I wasn't expecting it! ;) Anywho~ AMAZINGLY WELL-WRITTEN MATE! ;) Thankee for the request! O-o Or was it update? I don't remember...
Mon, March 19th, 2012 8:17pm
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lol you thought so? ahaha
thanks so much mate :)) update or request? i dont remember , too^^
this is beautiful, and i can relate completely.
Mon, March 19th, 2012 10:15pm
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glad to hear that im not alone feeling like this.. :) thanks friend :)
Mon, March 19th, 2012 10:16pm
Good job, as expected! :) I think this is very true, and I really like the last three lines, b/c they describe how most people feel. Beautiful!! :)
Mon, March 19th, 2012 11:01pm
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aww.. thanks so much friend :)
yeah.. that's what im exactly feeling right now :)
I like it. The feeling of in love is peculiarly beautiful, but sometimes we just hold it too tight because of the fear of loss. That's always how we lose love and break love.
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yes, that is love..
anyways, thanks friend! :))
sweet these love poems .... no one ever falls for me
Tue, March 20th, 2012 7:41am
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aww.. unbelievable..but time will come that there will be..
anyways, thanks so much friend! :)
and I meant to say well done ....
Tue, March 20th, 2012 7:44am
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thanks so much friend! :))
Tue, March 20th, 2012 12:46am
Yeah its well written. I like it.
Tue, March 20th, 2012 8:32am
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thanks so much friend! :)
Tue, March 20th, 2012 1:45am
Beautiful and well written. I like this a lot! I felt that way before. Love is a wonderful yet also a stupid thing. Really great job :)
Tue, March 20th, 2012 9:10am
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aww.. thanks so much friend! :)
actually, that's what im feeling right now XD
nice work..
all put together very well...
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thanks so much friend :)
Tue, March 20th, 2012 4:45am
i love it
Tue, March 20th, 2012 9:36am
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thanks :)
Tue, March 20th, 2012 4:46am
weh ???
Tue, March 20th, 2012 10:31am
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hahah.. ano? XD
Tue, March 20th, 2012 4:48am
This was beautiful and excellently written. It got me thinking of the song 'I'm not that girl' from the Wicked Musical. Also, don't forget that you entered into my Magic Circle Contest.
Tue, March 20th, 2012 1:33pm
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yeah, i didnt forget^^ im starting to work on it..
anyways, thanks so much! :)
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Great work. I like your style.
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thank you so much friend! :)
Tue, March 20th, 2012 1:58pm
heyyy great work :) 9/10 fantastic poem
check out my stuff it is along similar theme to yours :D
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oh yeah, sure^^ thanks again:)
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bobthebuilder
Ah, the conundrum that is love. Well put.
Sun, March 18th, 2012 4:21amAuthor
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thanks brother bob :]
Sat, March 17th, 2012 9:51pm