A romantic Haiku.

 

Good Morning

 

Soft luscious lips meeting

Arms warmly embracing one another

Good morning my love

 

Stuart Rocks 2007


Submitted: April 14, 2007

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Ashygrl

Wow that's absolutly genius and true i totally understand... it i love haukis!!-ashy

Sat, April 14th, 2007 10:48pm

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Thank you, its amazing how much you can say with so few words.

Sat, April 14th, 2007 4:36pm

EdwardJBradleySr

poetrocks:

Tried to give this posting an "I Like It" vote but was prevented from doing so by some kind of "glitch" in the Booksie publishing/posting software. This is why this posting has "0" votes. All ratings given, prior to October 1, 2007, have been wiped-out by Booksie.

You may be able to fix this by re-posting it. Seems to be a common flaw for short poems under the "New & Improved" Booksie. Let me know.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Wed, December 5th, 2007 6:59am

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Thanks for your encouraging words.

Tue, December 4th, 2007 11:56pm

EdwardJBradleySr

poetrocks:

The "I Like It" voting problem for this posting has been fixed. Will tend to your other postings as well.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Wed, December 5th, 2007 9:06am

rickyengland

Simple and expressive

Wed, January 16th, 2008 11:40pm

Brown Skin

I recieved a lot of imagery out of such few words! Very well done! I liked it a lot

Fri, January 25th, 2008 9:25am

Drake Seraphrin Draconis

simple...why complicate an emotion that is already complicated enough...very well written and great emotion...

Mon, February 11th, 2008 10:25pm

mum55

Really great poem.....Juliet

Thu, February 14th, 2008 7:19pm

Madilynn Grace

It's beautuful. That's all I can really say. :)

Tue, April 22nd, 2008 9:48pm

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Thank you so very much.

Sat, November 1st, 2008 5:56am

OKesta

There is no better moment than waking in the arms of a loved one. Clean. Simple. Beautiful.

Fri, September 12th, 2008 2:47am

an0nym0us

i liked it^^

Fri, October 31st, 2008 9:55pm

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Thank you very much

Sat, November 1st, 2008 5:54am

craaig

Fantastic. What about morning breath?
I agree it is nice to wake up like this...
And, oops it is not a Haiku, and yet it has the spirit on one -- deep meanings in few words.

craaig

Wed, November 5th, 2008 3:42pm

ashley2

simple but great

Sun, November 9th, 2008 3:55pm

xXkaleyXkhaosXx

oh it's beautiful! Please check out my poetry and leave a comment, and stories!

Mon, November 10th, 2008 2:50am

AllisonHanks

so sweet and simple. just the way i like my haikus! very nice. check out some of my love inspired poetry. write on!

Mon, November 17th, 2008 6:38pm

lunaperra

Nice work, lovely poem:)

Sat, February 14th, 2009 11:50am

binesh

Short and sweet....a good one...

Tue, June 16th, 2009 12:00pm

Velena Mabry

I love how haikus capture things perfectly with such few words. Yours did that and thats hard to do.

Fri, June 19th, 2009 8:30am

Bloody Soul

I didn't know you could tell about something so big in such a small form. It was very nice.

Sat, August 8th, 2009 5:42pm

illalwayslovehim

One word; Amazing.
(:

Thu, August 20th, 2009 5:21am

anthusarabian

Haikulacious ...ly, neat...

Tue, October 20th, 2009 2:11am

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