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Sweet Caroline
My darling, my love
The night is young,
Our newborn friend,
Oh its time to go in your bed,
Time to recover your strength;
?
Sleep tight with thy brother,
Leave your burden in my carriage.
Tomorrow we’ll go far away,
Tomorrow will be a long day;
So baby
Don’t you forget to pray,
It could build you some courage;
And let me be your little pillow,
Even for a single night
?
This morning I’ll be your shoulder,
We’re going to have a great ride.
I’ll catch you when you’re dizzy,
I’ll hug you whenever you freeze;
I want to be always near you
I dreamt so much of you,
I’m fancied by the colors of your hue,
Oh yes you did
I’m allured by you
?
Oh but I know
This will no longer be true
You are nobody,
But my imagination
A ghostly wind over my shadow,
Oh I love you,
Even thou you’re not in my arms
You left me
Alone over the tragic wars
?
But never mind
Let my silly thoughts be weary,
It is only tonight
When I’ll let myself be happy,
So please, sweet Caroline,
Sleep.
And lay with me here
Even just for now
In our shortest second,
Touch me slight
Oh grip me tight,
Give me not your words,
But your smile,
Hug me no tender
But tight,
Cheer me no laughter
But delight,
Oh I need no last words
But you tonight.
?
Oh sweet Caroline,
Goodnight,
Tomorrow be ready for your flight,
Oh sweet tooth no longer a bride,
Watch me in and hug me your sky…
?
Tonight will be a pleasant room
So cherish me more
Like you’re not leaving soon,
Oh goodnight my little cake
Shelter me now
Don’t hesitate.
Submitted: May 18, 2008
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Comments
awwwww, that was really beautiful, beautiful words, beautiful pictures, yet so sad at the same time. But it's its sadness that makes it so beautiful. Wow, I am breathless, that was really wonderful my dear!
STeph:)
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thank you Steph :) you're beautiful too :)
oh its sadness... yes Its really sad...
sounds desperate... trying to move on the past...
but it cannot... that's it oh...
I hope this poem is really... beautiful oh like aphrodite XD
amazing! outstanding, breath taking mezmorising!! wow wow and wow! VERY WELL DONE!
Sun, May 18th, 2008 7:48pm
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hmm... I wonder what mezmorising means XD
ok so I'm still dull... but its ok. you did said wow three times and thats heartening! :) thank you so much for your time and comment... have a nice day... and oh a lot of thanks to you :)
Another beautiful poem...*clap clap*
Sun, May 18th, 2008 11:28pm
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thank you so much :)*smiles*
Mon, May 19th, 2008 12:02am
It was very well written!! ^__^ i liked it! keep writting!! this is my favorite line:
"You are nobody,
But my imagination
A ghostly wind over my shadow"
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oh thank you for mentioning those lines:)
feels a lot more better for me:)
Thank you:)
have a nice day pal:)
more poems to come for us:)
very well written indeed.. i especially love the last lines =) good work!!
Mon, May 19th, 2008 10:04am
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:) thank you for that:) have a nice day:)
Mon, May 19th, 2008 3:39am
so sweet, so sad, and so beautiful! lovely work! keep it up! :)
Mon, May 19th, 2008 10:30am
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thank you so much for that
have a nice day:)
That's great! I absolutely loved it. WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!
Mon, May 19th, 2008 4:30pm
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hey thank you for that :)
oh I will sure do write more:)
just... not that fast =P
It's so awesome, so sweet, so WOW. I love the rhyming towards the end, it's used so perfectly. Very well done on this!!!!!!!
Mon, May 19th, 2008 6:42pm
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oh your words are so heartening:)
You make me think I made this great huh:)
oh that's so nice...
and sweet too:)
warmth, love, sadness, acceptance ...selflessnes...u name it and a myriad of emotions here...
keep writing sweety
what's wrong with mssg board? Why can't I leave my comments there?
That poem on Devil inside me is so bare and naked truth of a sincere lover....did u read that?
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ahh... yes...well I don't know what's wrong here... in the msg board... oh,his poem gives me an idea ... but I wont tell XD
oh... thank you for your time:)
and have a nice day:)
I'll be asking about your country, somewhen I get curious again:)
very nice it had a southern twang to it
it was very cute and as always u do a wonderful job.
keep going...
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hmm... well I didn't know I always do a wonderful job...
yeah... I started here like a pipsqueak with ill readers, or no readers at all... slightly appreciated poems,and oh the errors... got many of 'em...
well that was the old days:)
and do you mind if I'd ask you? what is a southern twang? auhmmm... well, if you're saying keep going, well, I will... I will:)
He sounds like a real southern gentlemen.
Beautifully written. I just really connected to the narrator and a poem is a beautiful thing to connect to.
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Oh thank you:) too bad, I don't know anything about southern gentlemen XD but the thing that you connect, oh that's good news baby!
Mon, May 19th, 2008 10:07pm
It is a lovely poem. I don't know if you meant it to be so, but I kept thinking that I was in some place far away in time and space when I read it.
Tue, May 20th, 2008 4:21am
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hmm... far away:) I felt that too:) on the back of this poem, well yeah while writing, I remember that it was raining XD thunder and lightning. oh . many . then a deep silence came-oh.. . then I said, how about a new poem?
cool... didn't expect it will be like this... I have insomnia XD
I wanted to tell myself: Goodnight! oh I just can't close my eyes! XD
thank you for your time, and your comment:)
have a nice day:)
Wow ! It is very well written in such way that take you to the deep of this poem . Great!
Tue, May 20th, 2008 2:49pm
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oh thank you very much:)
hmm... thank you for the request also:)
have a nice day:)
thank you for appreciating:)
Powerfully emotionally beautiful! I love the line:
"A ghostly wind over my shadow" thats amazing! Great work! Thankyou very much for letting me know about this! :-)
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oh no thank you:) for your appreciation... Not all people can have that:)
Tue, May 20th, 2008 8:49pm
This is insainly beautiful
I loved it
:)
-Ally
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oh XD thank you ally:) have a nice day:)
keep in touch dude:)
good work
Wed, May 21st, 2008 4:44am
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oh... thanks:)
Tue, May 20th, 2008 10:31pm
wow! your good at writing poems, better then i will ever be able to!!! good work!!! :D
Thu, May 22nd, 2008 12:32am
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hmm... oh thank you :) well, i'm sure you will be:)
Wed, May 21st, 2008 11:09pm
This is so prettyyy.
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thank you:) you're pretty too:)
Thu, May 22nd, 2008 5:07am
That was so beautiful
Thu, May 22nd, 2008 12:59pm
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oh it is? thank you:)
Thu, May 22nd, 2008 7:33pmFacebook Comments
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Wow!!! Wow!! Wow!! How intensely beautiful!!
Sun, May 18th, 2008 1:05pmHowever, its a bit long for a goodnight :) I liked it so very much!! Wonderful...
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oh... those three wows mean a lot!!!
Sun, May 18th, 2008 11:57pmthanks a lot ahh...
so that comment was enlightening... :)
your the first to comment oh thank you very much
have a great day :)