The Love I Hold (Zero's Challenge)

Timeless Thoughts

This is such a beautiful piece. You are so very sweet and talented. Gary

Imuildaeren

A beautiful piece yo are so talnted Susan.

Imuildaeren

ment to say *you. :)

Brian W

Short but a poem showing the love you have for your husband. Well written Brian

lily of the nile

I thought this so very lovely. It is so very lyrical. New to the site. Love what I am seeing here.
Lily

loveandmusic

Beautiful. It shows very clearly your love for him. Nice work.

ZeroG57

Sweet and beautiful

Grammar: 100%
Meaning I can decipher: 97%
Sticking to topic: 98%
My overall likeness: 92%
Total: 387/400

Good Job!

angellynn

This is so beautiful. I hope he knows how much you love him. Well done my friend.

Angellynn:D

Alessandra Fireheart

That was a beautiful poem. The way everything flowed together was perfect and I loved how it was repetitive. It helped reveal a passion. Thanks for sharing.

dyingrosepetal

Beautiful as always Susan, it truely shows the strong love you possess for him. Keep up the good work as always!

A7XRica

It's short...but amazing. :D I love it =]

hollydar

This is beautiful - short but says everything it needs to. Good luck with the challenge.

acedawg

love it. yes, love is an awesome treasure :)

James Gueth

I knew I had to read the poem (being a love poem and all). I am delighted (I wanted to say happy?) that I did. The poem is lovely, straight to the poi ntand I bet your hubby must have loved it.

I have one question though, would you teach me how to write love poems?

James

Fairy of Light

Aww, that is so beautiful. It really shows how much you love your husband. I love it. :)

Lwazi Molepo

You're gifted with the word for sure.
I really like this poem and how it conveys so much through such simplicity.
As well, I dig the rhyme scheme :) [a-b-a-b-c a-d-a-d-c]
Most of all I love that it's born of heart.
Gary's Blessed to be loved this much.

Adameus

Wonderfully written, I really dig the format, I hope you don't mind if I borrow the 5 line per stanza thing for one of my poems. I'm sorry I haven't been on here too much, I've been busy with work, my love life, and I just started a new band and we've been practicing 5 days a week. I just didn't want you to think I was blowing you off, and as always, I always appreciate your criticism on my work. I hope to add more soon and have more time to read more of yours, as it has been a long while since I've had a chance to sit down and actually read anything. Also hope to keep in correspondence with you and if you know of any other writers on the site who would like my work or I might like theirs, let me know. Again, another wonderful piece of writing compiled by one of my absolute favorite writers. Hope to hear back soon.

Kale Youngblood

i like it Susan, have you showed your husband Gary? i'm sorry it took me so long to read your poem, i've been really busy abd i just had surgery yesterday. although i know this is not an excuse. so, i am sorry.

Felipe Lima

Beautiful, Susan, Just beautiful as always! You described in a few words a kind of love that only few people are lucky to feel. i imagine your husband it's very proud of you. Thanks for sharing with me this wonderful experience.

Kisses
Felipe :]

rickyengland

Very good indeed Susan. I think it should be used in an anniversary card...certainly better IMO than most of the naff verses I read in many greeting cards. Ricky.