Get it?

The thought on existence

The thought os extinction

The Thought of I

The thought of you

The afterthought of when we left

After we were gone

We are left with the thought of thinking

Of a thought to change our minds

To stay where we belong


Submitted: February 11, 2010

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guitarplayer

Wow. You can really take your poem on two levels, just literally or take it really deeply and philosophically- I like it =] As for the editing thing, thanks for the offer, I will let you know if I ever need an editor, thanks.

Wed, February 17th, 2010 3:17pm

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Heh, thanks.

Wed, February 17th, 2010 7:23am

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