Featured Review on this writing by Kenneth Wright
"Dammit Bill, I've tried several time times to comment on this. But you keep publishing a new chapter before I can. I'm glad Eileen is going along for the cruise so us landlubbers can understand what the hell is happening! Also, I think you should put in some in-chapter breaks because they are so long. I sometimes have to get up while reading a chapter and can't find my place before spending a lot of time searching for it.
As for the story itself: Hey! I'm really enjoying it and can't wait for the next chapter.
Ken"
