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Featured Review on this writing by DragonWriter91

"Hi Secret Geek, Thanks for letting me know about this -- I am really enjoying it! As I mentioned in one of the text comments (not sure if you got that or not), you are a kickass writer and I love how vivid you are with your descriptions.

I think my favorite POV thus far is from Rue. And I love that you're using it for a boy's name! I can only recall reading about one Rue before, and that was in the Hunger Games. But since he is Mexican, it may be pronounced differently ? (Ru-ey?)

Lastly, if I was writing this -- I would probably structure it with having one POV per chapter rather than multiple in one. Gives readers the chance to process what they're reading and gives a clearer delineation of POVs. That's just my suggestion; if this what you would like to do and it benefits your style, stick with it. :)

Finally, I think you mean "Prank" instead of "Crank" at the end. Unless I read it wrong?

Cheers, and keep on writing! You got this. :)

- J "

'A loner, a survivor, an idealist and an outcast... and they all had a reason to kill.'

The first days of the 2025 Trump presidency are upon the students of Sherman High and there are big changes ahead. From changes to dress code and bathroom rights, to wider changes in the country (like detention centers and immigration round-ups), life is becoming even harder than it was before. But for one person at Sherman High, this brave new America is far from the greatness they were promised.

Follow the stories of Hope, Aust, Tammy and Rue as they try to negotiate life and love, loss and liberty in 2025.

New chapters every Saturday and Sunday.

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